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July 26, 2006
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I want to tell you that you are beautiful
But I don't merely want these words heard
I want them felt by you
      Because you should feel as beautiful as you are

It's not just your eyes that make you beautiful
(though they seem to always invite my awe-struck gaze)

And it's not just your hair
(though the strokes of light in each strand illuminate everything around you)

And it's not just your smile
(though it reminds me to enjoy life instead of focusing on the struggles it brings)

And it's not just your voice
(which will always,
always sweep me away from my sorrows
and draw me closer to an unexplainable happiness)

Or even your hands
(though they sing my tension to sleep when I get to hold them)

It's your heart...what I feel from your heart is what makes you beautiful in my soul.
          And you are so,
                               so beautiful...

Not only in my eyes, but in my life...
Words that just came to me. I wanted to tell her that she was beautiful, but I began hearling cliche phrases in my head...and I thought to myself " how meaningless is it to say things that people have been saying for centuries?".

I wanted to be different

Hopefully I was
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virtualcasanova Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
one word : BEAUTIFUL ! :)
jessiegirl17 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
I love these words. 
Aliciaclaw Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My boyfriend makes me feel this way :heart: I am such a lucky girl ^_^
Blackblossom659 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful words.
taichitwo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so sincere . lovely .
AvengerKitty12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic! (This is how my boyfriend makes me feel...)
mintochiharu Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this is truly beautiful, I'm speechless how amazing this is :wow: Lovely work! :happycry:
nicolegraffitty Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
One word: Beautiful. :heart:
Desire2live Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
That. Is. Beautiful.
Swirl-spill Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Oh my Frog :love: THIS is beautiful, whoever she is is so lucky to have you c:

You, sir, gave beautiful a definition :)
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